Interstice: The Curious, The Cautious, The Hollow (3)

 THE WATCHER
As Eden stepped out of the Heavens, she felt nothing like the rumors she had heard about angels who left. If anything, she felt lighter than before, as though an invisible burden she had carried for far too long had quietly lifted from her shoulders.

But when her feet touched the ground, the world beneath her was nothing like the Heavens. It felt heavier—rooted—while the air around her was cool, not stinging with cold, but unfamiliar enough to make her aware of every breath she took.

As she moved deeper into the place known as the Outside World, a strange sensation crept over her. The hairs at the nape of her neck rose instinctively, a silent warning without a name. She couldn’t tell what had unsettled her—only that something had. She paused and looked around. There was no movement, no sound. Just a heavy stillness, pressing in from all sides.

Eden walked for some time, though she couldn’t tell how long. The landscape offered no markers—no sun to measure, no path to follow—only uneven ground that shifted subtly beneath her steps. The farther she went, the quieter it became, until even her own movements felt intrusive.

Then, at a distance, she noticed something that did not belong to the stillness. A tree stood ahead—taller than the rest, its branches stretching upward as though reaching for a sky that refused to answer. Perched high among them was a figure, still and unmoving, as if carved into the tree itself. From where she stood, she couldn’t make out any features, only the silhouette—elevated, watchful.

She hesitated, unsure why her attention had been drawn there. Yet something about the presence felt deliberate, as though it had always been meant to be found. Eden moved closer, her steps slow and careful, until the figure grew clearer against the lush green of the tree. Only then did she realize she was not alone.

Drawn by curiosity, she moved closer and saw that his gaze fixed high in the sky. She couldn’t help herself. “What are you doing?” she asked. He did not look at her. After a beat, he replied, “Can’t you see?” Eden followed his gaze, and her eyes widened at the sight. A fracture had split the sky—and she realized immediately where it was coming from: Heaven.

He kept his eyes on the fracture and spoke again, almost softly, “You see it too, don’t you?” Eden froze for a heartbeat; a faint unease threading through her curiosity. Her lips parted, then closed, as if testing the words before they left. Finally, her voice emerged, soft and careful, almost a whisper, “Yes… I see it.”

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